Anonymous
could please correct this letter or draft in better way pls
Date: 07th April, 2008
Ref : KCW/101/2008 Al Salem Establishment Safat, 32035. Shuwaikh.
Attention: Mr. Mohammad Amin, Human Resources Manager
Dear Mr. Amin,
SUPPLY OF MANPOWER: REVISED RATES
Further to your letter dated 23rd March 2008, we would like to bring to your notice that the rates quoted for the supply of Engineering candidates are very low in relation to other companies' quoted fees. Therefore could you please send us revised increased rates for the Engineer category in order that we may supply suitable candidates on time.
Yours sincerely,
Hussain Yatim
Deputy General Manager
This seems odd. Who is charging whom? If you are supplying candidates for jobs, then it is for you to set the charges. If the person to whom you are writing is supplying candidates, then the letter does not make sense.