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gary lee  #74139  Tue, 15 Feb 05 02:51 PM
Hi Friend,

Can someone please check if there's any problem with my sentence below. This is to be applied in my CV. Pls furnish my words and if there's any mistake please make an amendment. Thank you

Responsibilities:
Provide customer support in computer-system setup and PC troubleshooting as in handling intermittent pc problems, diagnosing system integrity, examining harddisk configuration, diagnostic tools and resolving configuration conflicts. Plus, Dealing with computer sales and simple network configuration/setup.


Working Experience:
Gained experience as a computer technician by learning to identify and repair common everyday pc problems and software support along with additional knowledge in system operations and knowing various types of hardware and software. Also,familiar with ways to keep PC running effectively.

Thank you so much,
Gary
  
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Mister Micawber  #74141  Tue, 15 Feb 05 02:58 PM

Looks basically good, Gary. A few little changes:


Responsibilities:

Provide customer support for computer system setup and PC troubleshooting: handling intermittent PC problems, diagnosing system integrity, examining hard disk configuration, utilizing diagnostic tools and resolving configuration conflicts. Also, dealing with computer sales and simple network configuration/setup.


Work Experience:

Experience as a computer technician, learning to identify and repair common PC and software support problems, understanding system operations and various types of hardware and software. Also, familiar with ways to keep PCs running effectively.

  
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gary lee  #74169  Tue, 15 Feb 05 06:07 PM
Thanks for your help so much!! Smile [:)]
  
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