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Anonymous  #575206  Fri, 10 Oct 08 05:23 PM
Please correct the following statement

" I would now like to further my studies to the Master's Degree level as this will enable me achieve my career goals in life."

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Grammar Geek  #575228  Fri, 10 Oct 08 06:48 PM

Anonymous


" I would now like to further my studies to the Master's Degree level as this will enable me achieve my career goals in life."

"I would now like to pursue a master's degree to help me achieve my career goals."

 


 

  
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