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#575206 Fri, 10 Oct 08 05:23 PM

Please correct the following statement

" I would now like to further my studies to the Master's Degree level as this will enable me achieve my career goals in life."

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#575228 Fri, 10 Oct 08 06:48 PM

Anonymous

" I would now like to further my studies to the Master's Degree level as this will enable me achieve my career goals in life."

"I would now like to pursue a master's degree to help me achieve my career goals."

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