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Egyptian2007  #511316  Thu, 08 May 08 05:55 PM

Could you please correct the following paragraph for me? Thanks.

There are past conflicts and unpleasant experiences which were caused by personal interests, teachers offering private tutoring and teachers reporting to the Directorate. Those conflicts have created a state of enduring anxiety in the head teacher and a lot of ‘cat and mouse’ games between the teachers and the school administration. The head teacher has a general impression that a large number of school teachers are dishonest and looking only for their personal interests…If a head teacher does not trust you, how then can he/she seek your opinion?

  
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Feebs11  #511360  Thu, 08 May 08 08:09 PM

Egyptian2007

Could you please correct the following paragraph for me? Thanks.

There are past conflicts and unpleasant experiences which were caused by personal interests, teachers offering private tutoring and teachers reporting to the Directorate. Those conflicts have created a state of enduring anxiety in the head teacher and a lot of ‘cat and mouse’ games between the teachers and the school administration. The head teacher has a general impression that a large number of school teachers are dishonest and only concerned with/looking out for their personal interests. If a head teacher does not trust you, how then can he/she seek your opinion?

 
  
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Egyptian2007  #512015  Sat, 10 May 08 10:52 AM

Thanks very much Feebs11

  
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