Plz help in correcting the sentences - God Bless You

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Anonymous  #167135  Wed, 07 Dec 05 05:36 AM

Hi all,

Plz help me in correcting the following sentences--- urgent.  God Bless You All.

1.        Canada’s principle competition for the gold medal is Russia.

2.        It’s been a long time since you and I have seen one another.

3.        The amount of people effected by the terrorist attacks on September 11 is larger then the amount effected by the attack on Pearl Harbor.

4.        Rainbows, that are not seen by people everyday, are comprised of little droplets of water.

5.        You made less mistakes then me.

6.        “Thanks Jane my sweet” cried Tom “you made my day!”

7.        Reading the play A Streetcar Named Desire, the character Stanley Kowalski reminded me of my brother-in-law.

8.        Arthur posseses every material thing a man could want, and he acquires more stuff everyday.

9.        It is necesary for each class member to introduce themselves in Spanish, e.g., “Me llamo Tiffany.”

10.     Every day there are less and less World War I veterans alive.

11.     We are sometimes challenged by philisophical arguements.

12.     I owe money to the guy whose pants are too tight.

13.     Mere correlation does not infer a casual connection.

14.     Reading the IRS booklet, the directions seem really inconsistant, e.g., they’re self-contradictory.

15.     Many concepts are open, its not necesary to have a precise definition of every word.

16.     Jerry has many friends, i.e., Elaine, Kramer, and George, none of whom posses particularly strong ethicle principals.

17.     If a friend was to ask me what is the good life, I would first recommend that they read Aristotle.

Waiting for help Smile [:)] 

Thnx

  
CalifJim  #167184  Wed, 07 Dec 05 08:22 AM
God helps those who help themselves.
Give us your attempts to solve these for yourself.
Then we can comment upon your efforts.

CJ

  
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nona the brit  #167185  Wed, 07 Dec 05 08:24 AM

Hi,

This looks like your homework. We don't do homework.

But for a start you have lots of spelling mistakes.

If you show us your corrections, we will take a look and help you.

  
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Anonymous  #348015  Sat, 07 Apr 07 04:49 AM

The law from the 1800s mandated that men could buy alcohol and cigarettes only from a state store.

 

The employee guide indicated that men could add their spouses to their health care plan.

  
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