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poci_wasiats  #514633  Sat, 17 May 08 01:31 AM
pls correct this sntence if there are any mistakes... 

do you have any suggestions? i think this sentence is too long.. Y_Y

thx... 

 

appropriate information might provide appropriate knowledge and that knowledge might result in some appropriate decisions in order to solve the company’s problems or achieve the company’s goals.

  
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CalifJim  #514647  Sat, 17 May 08 02:18 AM
It's very repetitive (appropriate, appropriate, appropriate, might, might, knowledge, knowledge, company's company's), and you need to apply some basic techniques like capitalization and punctuation.

Other than that, there's nothing wrong with it.  The grammar is fine.

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poci_wasiats  #514668  Sat, 17 May 08 03:35 AM
 ok... thx...
  
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