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Amy and I left for the mall at 7 to get James a birthday cake. It was his 35th birthday. At the bakery shop, we had a hard time choosing from a wide selection of cakes. When I agreed to pick up a cake,
I thought it was a
20 minute job including the travel
time, tops.
There
were blueberry cake with chocolate truffle filling, vanilla iced
; tiramisu with chocolate
shavings; keylime torte dipped in truffle chocolate, just to name a few. After 20 minutes of dilemma, we bought the
keylime torte because
i loved keylime. One the way home, we got involved in a traffic accident. We weren't
injured but the cake wasn't that lucky.