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New2grammar  #515169  Sun, 18 May 08 12:08 PM


It never fails to amuse me to watch my dog work for treats. His droopy eyes, slobbering mouth and the look that says 'please give me a treat' always cheer me up when I'm down. Unfortunately, he's mostly obedient when he knows he'll be given treats. The moment you're out of treats, you are no longer his favorite, not even an ounce of his attention unless he's downright bored.That's my cheap dog.

 

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Mister Micawber  #515175  Sun, 18 May 08 12:53 PM
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It never fails to amuse me to watch my dog work for treats. His droopy eyes, slobbering mouth, and the look that says 'please give me a treat' always cheer me up when I'm down. Unfortunately, he's obedient mostly when he knows he'll be given treats. The moment I'm out of treats, I'm no longer his favorite; I get not even an ounce of his attention unless he's downright bored.That's my fickle dog.
  
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New2grammar  #515246  Sun, 18 May 08 05:27 PM

Thanks, MM.

  
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