Correction in the letter to Uncle

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Anonymous

#324988 Tue, 06 Feb 07 06:52 AM

Dear all

please help me out in correcting the letter which i have drafted to send to my uncle

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Dear uncle

Greetings to you,

Thanks for your suggestions.

I am working on my English, but now a days i am not getting much time to spend on it, as my semester exams are approaching (scheduled on 19, 21 and 23rd of this month) and on the other hand I have to complete the CII assignment and send them before 2nd of March.

In CII I have 10 assignments and I have planed to complete at least 5 before 10 of this month and then i will start studying for my semester exams. Again after my semester( i.e. 23rd Feb ). I will restart CII prepartaion. Before 26th Feb I will complete all the assignments and send to them, as on 27th feb I an going home for 10 days, I will be back on 8th March.

with warm regards

ankur goyal

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please resplond as soon as possible

Anonymous

Mithunbarik

#325988 Thu, 08 Feb 07 07:21 AM

Dear Ankur, I have tried to correct it as per my knowledge. It was almost correct barring some small mistakes.

Dear uncle,

Greetings to you.

Thanks for your suggestions.

I am working on my English, but now a days I am not getting much time to spend on it, as my semester exams are approaching (scheduled on 19, 21 and 23rd of this month) and on the other hand I have to complete the CII assignment and send them before 2nd of March.

In CII, I have 10 assignments and I have planned to complete at least 5 before 10th of this month and then I will start studying for my semester exams. Again after my semester( i.e. 23rd Feb ) (no dot) I will restart CII preparation. Before 26th Feb I will complete all the assignments and send (no to) them, as on 27th feb I an going home for 10 days. I will be back on 8th March.

with warm regards

Ankur Goyal

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Michelia

#326362 Thu, 08 Feb 07 04:46 PM

Hi. I think it would be better if we say:' but recently I haven't got much time to spend on it' instead of 'but now a days I am not getting much time to spend on it'. In my opinion

'now a days' is not a correct word

and we can't use 'have much time' in present progressive tense

Moreover, ' assignment' should be replaced by ' assignments'