Vincent Teo  +  422887 Mon, 24 Sep 07 12:12 PM Can I say, (a)    A sale assistant showed us some pretty necklaces for example. (b)   I heard a loud sound / a sound / some sound at my back. The robbers started to shoot in the air to make us frightened. (c)    The burglars began to feel impatient. The burglars were impatient. (d)   When I saw the burglars / robbers dashed into the jewellery, they all were wearing the masks. I heard shooting sound at my back. Vincent Teo Joined on Sat, Mar 31 2007 Veteran Member 5,660

	Neeraj Jain  +  422891 Mon, 24 Sep 07 12:25 PM My corrections (highlighted in blue) (a) A sale assistant showed us some pretty necklaces for example.     A sale assistant showed us some pretty necklaces. (b)  I heard a loud sound / a sound / some sound at my back. Correct       The robbers started to shoot in the air to make us frightened. The robbers started shooting in the air to frighten us. (c) The burglars began to feel impatient. Correct       The burglars were impatient. Correct (d) When I saw the burglars / robbers dashed into the jewellery, they all were wearing the masks. I heard shooting sound at my back.  When I saw the burglars / robbers dashing into the jewellery, they all were wearing masks. I heard a sound of shooting at my back. Neeraj Jain Joined on Fri, Sep 7 2007 Regular Member 583 Smile allows you to win.