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Vincent Teo  #427232  Fri, 05 Oct 07 02:48 AM

Can i say,

(a)    There was a book store / bookstore that was in a mall which was near Susan’s house.

(b)   There was a good sale on books and also on discount.

(c)    There was a large crowd busy on the sale.

(d)   Many people were looking at a girl that had fainted on the floor.

(e)    She calmed her friend down.

(f)     Ai Ling told her neighbour about the accident that had happened.

  
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Feebs11  #427236  Fri, 05 Oct 07 03:09 AM
 Vincent Teo wrote:

Can i say,

(a)    There was a book store / bookstore that was in a mall which was near Susan’s house.

(b)   There was a good sale on books and also on discount.  There was a good sale and many books were discounted
(c)    There was a large crowd busy at the sale.

(d)   Many people were looking at a girl who had fainted and was lying/lay on the floor.

(e)    She calmed her friend down.

(f)     Ai Ling told her neighbour about the accident that had happened.

  
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Neeraj Jain  #427319  Fri, 05 Oct 07 09:27 AM
I agree with Feebs.
  
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