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Vincent Teo wrote:

Can i say, (a)    There was a book store / bookstore that was in a mall which was near Susan’s house. (b)   There was a good sale on books and also on discount.  There was a good sale and many books were discounted (c)    There was a large crowd busy at the sale. (d)   Many people were looking at a girl who had fainted and was lying/lay on the floor. (e)    She calmed her friend down. (f)     Ai Ling told her neighbour about the accident that had happened.