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Vincent Teo  +  409485 Sun, 26 Aug 07 08:39 AM

Can I say,

(a) Susan likes to write essay. She can write her essay very well.  She was chosen by the

      teacher to represent her school to take part in the Essay Writing Competition.

(b) She spent a lot of time to practise her essay writing. When she had any problems, she

     asked her paresnts. Her teacher also helped her to solve it. Besides that, her friends also

     encouraged her to do well in the Essay Writing Competition.

(c) During the competition, she was as calm as a cat. As she wrote her essay, she tried to do

      her best in the competition.

(d) She received a big golden trophy by the organiser.

(e) They congratulated her for success. She shoke hands with them.

(f) Teacher Malinda chose Susan to take part in the competition. She went into training for

      the competition.

(g) When she encountered the new words, she consulted her parents to help her.

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Mister Micawber  +  409517 Sun, 26 Aug 07 10:19 AM

(a) Susan likes to write essays. She can write essays very well.  She was chosen by the

      teacher to represent her school in the Essay Writing Competition.

(b) She spent a lot of time practising her essay writing. When she had any problems, she

     asked her parents. Her teacher also helped her to solve them. Besides that, her friends also

     encouraged her to do well in the Essay Writing Competition.

(c) During the competition, she was as calm as a cat (?). As she wrote her essay, she tried to do

      her best in the competition.

(d) She received a big golden trophy from the organiser.

(e) They congratulated her on her success. She shook hands with them.

(f) Her teacher, Malinda, chose Susan to take part in the competition. She went into training for

      it.

(g) When she encountered new words, she consulted her parents.



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