Vincent Teo  +  427234 Fri, 05 Oct 07 02:49 AM Can i say,   (a)    It became an unforgettable day for Susan. (b)   When Susan was choosing the books in the book store, suddenly she heard a commotion. (c)    She realized the girl was lying on the floor. (d)   When she arrived, there were many people gathered at the spot.     Vincent Teo Joined on Sat, Mar 31 2007 Veteran Member 5,660

	Clive  +  427247 Fri, 05 Oct 07 04:09 AM Hi, a)    It became an unforgettable day for Susan. (b)   When Susan was choosing the books in the book store, suddenly she heard a commotion. (c)    She realized the girl was lying on the floor. (d)   When she arrived, there were many people gathered at the spot.   Yes, these are OK. Well done! Clive Clive Joined on Thu, Oct 28 2004 Canada Veteran Member 29,600 El tango argentino es un pensamiento triste que se puede bailar (The tango argentino is a sad thought which can be danced) Enrique Santos Discépolo