Hi there!
I corrected it a bit, and added some extra stuff to make it sound better. I tried my best, I hope it's ok.
At the San Sebastiano mountain chalet, I
could finally relax, by taking a shower. I put on the white woolen
plaid and a blue shirt. I bought it after I had read a story which
described it as an important element (important for what?). I
always take it with me when I go into the mountains. It makes me feel as if I'm living in a fairy tale, by being so warm and fuzzy. (I'm not entirely sure what are you trying to say here). If you touch it, it feels like something that's just been washed
and dried, being so fluffy...
At seven o' clock in the evening, the
surroundings became silent, so you can quietly have your dinner.
Outside the wind dissipates the clouds, and I watch one of them from the
window. It seems unable to go beyond the mountain, so it ends up going against it, squashing into it. Clouds look like soap bubbles which burst when they hit something. But
they are like cotton wool. I am at a table near the window, so I
can look outside, instead of simply staying in the dining room. I am all alone, but it's okay if you are in
the mountains or at cinema (the original is: if you are in the
mountains, at cinema as well). This way, I didn't notice that she
had entered and that she was talking with the manager. She took a room and she might dine with me, if
she would like to. She told me after having sat down. (told what?)
When first raindrops fell on glass, they made noise because they
knocked against a drain ground, then the glass became wet, so they made
less noise. I would like to tell her something; suddenly I
am happy like a glass of fresh water. This is not the right time, because I saw her
sobbing at one meter from a stranger. Of course I won't give her a
hearty welcome. (why not? :P)
“Does it get over things so fast?”
she asks me, just to say something.
“Before the sunset.”
She asks about the route, if it drains off one's energy. I reply, then I go back
to being serious, as usual, and I ask her about her equipment. She lacks the helmet and the harness. I have some spare ones in my car.
“A provident assassin,” she says.
“Well yes, in my own way, I
premeditate.”
“I am desperate.”
“Because of your health?”
“No, not that.”
I held my tongue so I won't say the cue of Totò (Totò is an italian actor My Note): “When
there is health...”. The effort of trying so makes my nose feel itchy, so I rub it, and I give a wince.
“A mountain face”, she says.
“Thanks for the compliment.”
“What about mine?” she ventures to
ask.
“It's like the one of a bride left alone at the altar.”
“More complicated than this, but it
is okay,” and she adds my name. I don't react. “Isn't that your
name?”
“This is my name and don't waste
your strength with doubts, because I won't lie you.”