It's the
first motivation letter I have written and I'm not so sure if it's a good one.
If anybody could correct it I would be very pleased. Thanks a lot>>
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Dear Sir or
Madam,>>
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I am
applying for a place at your University to spend the autumn semester 2006 at
the University of ***, Ireland.>>
Let me introduce myself. I am a 26 year old
student from Germany and I am presently
studying Product Engineering in the 7th semester at the University of
Applied Sciences in *** and I expect to receive my degree in Engineering
in July 2007. Before I am studied I made an apprenticeship to a moldmaker and
there I was confronted with highly technical tasks in a modern environment.
Finding solutions for specific customer requirements in an economical way was
my daily work as well as the improvement of the processes inside the company. I
got a deep insight into the way of converting a customer´s need into a product
by manufacturing metal molds for producing parts in the field of medicine,
packaging and automotive parts.>>
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The main reason why I have chosen your
University among many others are that you offers many courses which are very
interested for me. I think it offers a great choice for me to build up
international personal relations and to test myself in foreign surroundings. To
spend a few months at your University would be a great possibility for me to
learn a new culture, improve my English and meet people from all around the
world.>>
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I hope you will consider me for acceptance to
your university. I am looking forward to hearing from you.>>