Could anybody correct these 5 pairs of sentences for me?
I am really keen on knowing whether my sentences are right.

1)Lucus is an exciting tuitor who is teaching Chinese in Tangkak.=

*Lucus is an exciting tuitor teaching Chinese in Tangkak.

2.)The tuition of Chinese Booster is cheaper and the standard of it is higher. When it's compared to the tuitoin given by Mr.C.=

*The Tuition of Chinese Booster is cheaper and the standard of it is higher compared to to the tuition given by Mr.C.

The first tuition is the money that you need to pay when study in Chinese Booster.
Chinese Booster is the name of a tuition center.
Mr.C is other tuitor.
Can I say Mr.C's instead of tuiion given by Mr.C?

3)Because I study in Chinese Booster, I will lead chinese in my class.=
Studying in Chinese Booster, I will lead chinese in my class.

Does "lead chinese in my class " mean I will be the best in chinese in my class.
Does the second sentence get the meaning of" Because......so".
Should it be "Because I study in Chinese Booster" or "Because I am studying in Chinese Booster"

I am going to study there for two years only and I am the student there now.

4)Because Lucus is generous and love his mother school very much, he donates a big sum of money when his school is in need.=
Being generous and loving his mother school very much, Lucus donates a big sum of money when his school is in need.

5) Because I had been studying in Chinese Booster for two years, I passed with flying colours in Chinese of U.E.C examination.
=When been studying in Chinese Booster for two years, I passed with flying colours in Chinese of U.E.C examination.

Many thanks in advance
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Hi Vincent
Vctory Ong1)Lucus is an exciting tuitor who is teaching Chinese in Tangkak.=

*Lucus is an exciting tuitor teaching Chinese in Tangkak.
Both are the same. Tutor NOT tuitor - be careful.
Vctory Ong2.)The tuition of Chinese Booster is cheaper and the standard of it is higher. When it's compared to the tuitoin given by Mr.C.=

*The Tuition of Chinese Booster is cheaper and the standard of it is higher compared to to the tuition given by Mr.C.
The tuition in Chinese Booster is cheaper and the standard of it is higher in comparison to the tuition given/provided by Mr C.
Vctory Ong3)Because I study in Chinese Booster, I will lead chinese in my class.=
Studying in Chinese Booster, I will lead chinese in my class.
Studying in Chinese Booster will make me the first/best in my class.
Studying in Chinese Booster, I will be the best in my class.
Vctory Ong4)Because Lucus is generous and loves his mother school very much, he donates a big sum of money when his school is in need.=
Being generous and loving his mother school very much, Lucus donates a big sum of money when his school is in need.
What do you mean by 'mother school'?
Vctory Ong5) Because I had been studying in Chinese Booster for two years, I passed the U.E.C. examination in Chinese with flying colours. in Chinese of U.E.C examination.

=When After been studying in Chinese Booster for two years, I passed the U.E.C. examination in Chinese with flying colours.
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There are many little careless errors which I am not going to fix for you.

1) Your short form is correct.

2) Your short form is correct.

Can I say Mr.C's instead of tuiion given by Mr.C? -- Yes

3) No, try again.
Does "lead chinese in my class " mean I will be the best in chinese in my class.-- No

Does the second sentence get the meaning of" Because..so".-- No.

Should it be "Because I study in Chinese Booster" or "Because I am studying in Chinese Booster"-- Both are possible.

4) Your short form is correct.

5) No, try again.
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If I had been studying in Pei Hwa High School for six years then now I am studying in an university.
then my mother school will be Pei Hwa High School like mother country.
I think it is not called as mother school in English! Could anybody tell me how to call it.

Could I say it in this way?
Having been studying in Chinese Booster for two years, I passed the U.E.C. examination in Chinese with flying colours.

If I could say it in this way, does this sentence identical in meaning with the sentence "Because I had been studying in Chinese Booster for two years, I passed the U.E.C. examination in Chinese with flying colours."

Many thanks in advance
I think it is not called as mother school in English! Could anybody tell me how to call it.-- Your 'alma mater'.

Having been studying at Chinese Booster for two years, I passed the U.E.C. examination in Chinese with flying colours.-- Yes

If I could say it in this way, does this sentence identical in meaning with the sentence "Because I had been studying in Chinese Booster for two years, I passed the U.E.C. examination in Chinese with flying colours."-- Yes
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Because I study in Chinese Booster, I will be the best in my class.
Studying in Chinese Booster, I will be the best in my class.

Are they the same in meaning?

many thanks in advance
'At' is better. Yes, I read them as having the same meaning.
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Why did you choose to study at Chinese Booster?
Because studying at Chinese Booster will make me bacome the best in my class.

It is the same to answer him that Stuying in Chinese Booster, I will be the best in my class.
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