Could anyone check my essay?I'm not confident about me.

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Xuteng  #430177  Fri, 12 Oct 07 06:29 PM

Even if I learnt english for many years,my english is still not well enough.So I try to write.But when I want someone english native to tell me where I'm wrong,I got confused.Now I found this forum,I wish there could someone kind-hearted help me point out the mistakes I got in the essay.This will make a great effort in my english learning.Many thanks!

And this is my essay:

[Try to write in English]

Treating english as my second language, I find it difficult to understand some words or sentences.This semester,I got no english classes except one in the tourism college.When I study with those english major students, I feel a little nervous, not because I’m a foreigner, but my english ability is far behind them.Also I know the only studying in class is not enough. I should do more jobs about writting,speaking and listening.

So even my english is not well enough,but I’ll try my best to express what I think and how I feel in english.
The best way of studying a language is trying to think in that language.
Please tell my where I am wrong in my essay. Many thanks!

  
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Feebs11  #430194  Fri, 12 Oct 07 08:12 PM
 Xuteng wrote:

Even if I learnt english for many years,my english is still not well enough.So I try to write.But when I want someone english native to tell me where I'm wrong,I got confused.Now I found this forum,I wish there could someone kind-hearted help me point out the mistakes I got in the essay.This will make a great effort in my english learning.Many thanks!

And this is my essay:

[Try to write in English]

Treating English as my second language, I find it difficult to understand some words or sentences.This semester, I got no English classes except one in the tourism college.When I study with those English major students, I feel a little nervous, not because I’m a foreigner, but because my English ability is far behind theirs them.Also I know the only that only studying in class is not enough. I should do more jobs about writing, speaking and listening.

So even My English is not good enough,but I’ll try my best to express what I think and how I feel in English.

The best way of studying a language is trying to think in that language.


Please tell my where I am wrong in my essay. Many thanks!



***  English is always spelt with a capital letter.

Always put one space after any punctuation.

In its content, it is not at all bad. Keep practicing!
  
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Xuteng  #430275  Sat, 13 Oct 07 04:04 AM

Thank you so much for checking my essay!

You are patient and helpful!

  
Xuteng  #430276  Sat, 13 Oct 07 04:05 AM

Thank you so much!

You are kind and helpful!

  
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