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MY MOTHER

Life without someone who loving us just like an empty world. All people in this world have their own person who always takes care of them. So do I. She is the only one, 'my mother'.

I really respect my mother. Although she is getting old but she always good in dressing. For her, it is a must. When someone asks me about my mother, I love to tell them about herself. Her name is Wan Rohani Wan Ahmad, now she is 46 years old. She is approximately 5 feet tall with the slim body. Different from me, she has a fair and soft skin. Something about her physical that I really like is she has a dimple in her cheek and also in her chin. So, when she speaks and smiles, she looks very nice and beautiful.

My mother has a long and curly hair. Something that I really afraid is her big eyes. As a mother, she always gives me an advice and occasionally scolded me. So, when she do that, her big eyes will change into the small eyes and looks so sharp and sometimes will make me afraid. Even though she always scolded me, I know that it is her job, as a mother who wants to make sure all of her children have a good attitude.

For me, my mother is everything in my family and my life. She always gives me a big support when I having any problems with my friends and so on. She always pushes me to study hard and to have a good education. As a good mother, she likes to lend her hand to solve my homework which I don't know how to do. She's good in everything. I think, it is a great deal to have a mother like her.

Beside be a good mother and wife, she is also good in cook. She knows what all of us like to eat. Every day, she will cook our favourite's meal to make sure we will have a good meal. She very loves to cook. With her, my life just like in the heaven!

When I remember my mother, I always remember this song:

Who should I give my love to?

My respect my hounour to?

Who should I pay good mind to?

After ALLAH and RASULULLAH

Comes my mother

Who next? my mother (2x)

Say ALHAMDULILLAH, thank you ALLAH (2x)

For my mother...Emotion: smileEmotion: smile



Finally, I really want to say that I love my mother so much! In this life, I will make sure that I will respect her and doesn't broke her heart. I love my mother..



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MY MOTHER

Life without someone who loves us is impossible, just like a world empty of people. Everyone in this world has someone who takes care of them. So do I. She is my mother.

I really respect my mother. Although she is getting old she always dresses well. For her, it is very important to dress well. When someone asks me about my mother, I love to talk to them about her. Her name is Wan Rohani Wan Ahmad. She is 46 years old. She is approximately 5 feet tall and very slim. Unlike me, she has skin that is fair and soft. Something I like very much is that she has a dimple in her cheek and also in her chin. So, when she speaks and smiles, she looks very beautiful.

My mother has long and curly hair. Sometimes I am really afraid of her big eyes. Let me tell you why. As a mother, she always gives me good advice and occasionally scolds me. So, when she does that, her big eyes change, she narrows her eyes and looks so sharp that I am afraid. Even though she always scolds me, I know that it is because as a mother she wants to make sure all of her children have the right attitude.

To me, my mother means everything. She is my family, my support and my adviser. Even when I have trouble with my friends she helps me.She always pushes me to study hard and to have the best education. As a good mother, she likes to lend a hand to complete my homework when I am doubtful. She's good at everything. I think, it is a great deal to have a mother like her.

Beside be a good mother and wife, she is also a good cook. She loves to cook. She knows what each of us likes to eat. Every day, she cooks our favourite dishes to make sure we enjoy a good meal. With her around, my life is heaven!

When I think of my mother, I always remember this song: ***********

Finally, I really want to say that I love my mother very much! In this life, I will make sure that I respect her and don't do anything to let her trust in me down. I love my mother..
Anonymous:
aww nice

say Salam to ur mother Emotion: smile
Anonymous:
Adorable really i like the song and the essay is amazing barak allaho feek
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