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Latest post Mon, Feb 19 2007 8:48 PM by julielai. 1 replies.
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Anonymous  +  330936 Mon, 19 Feb 07 11:51 AM

Hello, I have a big problem: I have to write a 10 page long essay and my english is so poor... So could you please check my preface because I think if my preface was ok, it would be much easier for me to go on. Thank you a lot!

The subject of this essay is the outsourcing of equipped electronics assemblies at the company *** which was carried out for the discharge of the capacities in the company internal electronics maps manufacturing.

The project " capacity discharge of electronics maps manufacturing " originated on the basis of capacity bottlenecks which are to be led back on a strong growth of the enterprise during the past years. In the first step this practise work would like to the prerau's settlements which led to the origin of this project. On this occasion, the backgrounds of the outsourcing are demonstrated and possible alternatives are indicated. In the second step the realisation of the project is picked out as a central theme taking into account the besides appearing problems. A view of the future of the electronics maps manufacturing forms the end of this practise report.

 

julielai  +  331124 Mon, 19 Feb 07 08:48 PM
Perhaps if you cut out the passive voice and write in simpler sentences, I can understand your preface a little better...
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