changeling  +  552470 Fri, 08 Aug 08 12:26 PM Hi everybody Could you, please, check my grammar and vocabulary in the following sentences? I appreciate your help Many women would dare to quit smoking unless they weren't afraid of putting on unwanted weight. To what extent are these fears true and how to keep the weight off? Thanks in advance changeling Joined on Sat, May 10 2008 Junior Member 75 Grammar, Vocabulary

	Clive  +  552496 Fri, 08 Aug 08 02:08 PM Hi, Many women would dare to quit smoking unless they weren't afraid of putting on unwanted weight. To what extent are these fears true and how to keep the weight off? Many women would try to quit smoking except that they are afraid of putting on unwanted weight. To what extent are these fears true, and how can they keep the weight off? 'Dare' is not a good word to choose. Quitting smoking is not something that sounds like it requires bravery/courage. Best wishes, Clive Clive Joined on Thu, Oct 28 2004 Canada Veteran Member 29,298 El tango argentino es un pensamiento triste que se puede bailar (The tango argentino is a sad thought which can be danced) Enrique Santos Discépolo