First, it needs to be divided into paragraphs. As it is, the length is offputting. Below, I have underlined some problem areas in grammar, punctuation, or vocabulary, and I have struck out unnecessary words (you may have to revise to reconstruct the sentences without these words):
All the people around the world buy things everyday.
These things people buy depend on the age, personality and needs in
that moment of their lives to be happy, for a good product you must
agree with the price, quality and guaranty. To
start this composition about habits of shopping, I said that I prefer
to shop on site for many reasons some often are: that you can touch the
product and feel, see how works, you can ask about him, try before you
buy before because sometimes if we don’t know the product and we buy we
could have a bad experience, ask for a lower price, guaranty and make
contact with the sales persons who can help you tomorrow if you have
something matter with the product, besides this the disadvantages could
be that you want to spend a lot of time to buy the product and don’t
have many options to choose. On
the other hand, the advantage to buy things on line are you save time,
it doesn’t cost any parking, and you have a lot of options to choose,
you can compare prices, quality and types in a short time and in the
comfortable chair of your computer, however you have the risk of
experience prices, the product isn’t work like you need, and you don’t
know how could be more useful. To
conclude, it’s important to know and use the new technology that
advance day a day, but for me it’s better to mix both shopping habits.
If we do this I’m sure we always would buy the best product with good
price and quality to be satisfied with the product.
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