could you check a part 1 of my CV, please?

Hi,

Here's my immediate reaction on reading this.

Your CV should tell me about you. This tells me nothing about you.

Best wishes, Clive

Hi,

ISB - iis a picture based search engine. With their mobile phones, users can take a picture of an object of interest and send this picture via MMS to a dedicated service number. A response is delivered to the user containing useful information and links. Most services are reached via one number. Content is selected  by an image, eg when an user sends a photo of an object, the dedicated server generates an answer which is based upon user-updated data.

Clive.

Hi,

why is there no article before content ? In a context like this, 'content' is often treated as uncountable.

here's another part, would you mind taking a look?

The service is used by newspapers (e.g. Time << this is a magazine, not a newspaper) as well. Users can take a picture of a particular article (some articles are marked with a special sign) and receive additional information about it (e.g. film etc <<< I think you need to clarify your meaning here.) All information is indexed by images. The system recognises them and selects related to them information.

Best wishes, Clive