Could you check my resume, thanks a lot!

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Guest  #78470  Fri, 04 Mar 05 10:22 PM
Friends,
Could you give me you hand with checking my resume?
I am not good at English, (my native language is chinese)
so maybe there are many mistakes of grammer and spell on my resume.
Could you check it and show me the mistakes,
thanks very much.
thanks!!
:)


Here is part of my resume:
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POSITION DESIRED

PR EXECUTIVE
To obtain an entry-level position within a PR institution requiring communication skills and strong passion for PR industry.


RELATED Experience

Campaign Inspector, Company name, Taipei 2004-2005

Assisted in kinds of campaigns, include meetings, classes and conferences, held by Company name, prepare and operate in order to keep the campaigns get through smoothly and successfully.

Executive Assistant, Academic of EOE, NTUCompany name, Taipei ,2003 May-Dec

Worked in an across-department team that managed and performed an international conference, CPR 2003, and responsible for a variety of campaign performance from location choosing to attenders confirming. Successfully launched a prosperous conference with about 1500 attenders from more than twenty counties.

Intern Reporter, Company name RADIO , Taoyuan 2002-2003

Worked as an intern reporter on AM774 Radio, that involved implementing a radio program “NEWS & WEATHERS” and planning a radio program, “carrying the recycled bag”, that introduced audiences the new law about limited use of plastic bags.

Research Assistant, Company name, Taoyuan 2002-2003

Assisted in digital video research and on-line game research which are hosted by Professor Yuntsai, Chou and consigned by CHT, prepared and analyzed data and figure for pages.
  
Mister Micawber  #78559  Sat, 05 Mar 05 04:01 AM

POSITION DESIRED: PUBLIC RELATIONS OFFICER

To obtain an entry-level position within a Public Relations institution requiring communication skills and a strong passion for the PR industry.


RELATED EXPERIENCE

Campaign Inspector, Company name, Taipei 2004-2005

Assisted in campaigns, including meetings, classes and conferences, held by Company name, prepared and administered in order to see the campaigns through smoothly and successfully.

Executive Assistant, Academic of EOE, NTU [I CANNOT INTERPRET THIS UNDERLINED PORTION, BUT I FEEL 'ACADEMIC' AT LEAST IS WRONG. YOU SHOULD WRITE OUT ALL UNFAMILIAR ACRONYMS AND ABBREVIATIONS, HERE AND THROUGHOUT THE RESUME] Company name, Taipei, 2003 May-December

Worked in an across-department team that managed and administered an international conference, CPR 2003, and was responsible for a variety of campaign tasks, from venue choice to attendee confirmation. Successfully launched a prosperous conference with about 1500 attendees from more than twenty countries. [COUNTIES? COUNTRIES?]

Intern Reporter, Company name RADIO , Taoyuan 2002-2003

Worked as an intern reporter on AM774 Radio, which involved implementing a radio program “NEWS & WEATHER” and planning a radio program, “Carrying Recycled Bags”, which introduced audiences to a new law limiting use of plastic bags.

Research Assistant, Company name, Taoyuan 2002-2003

Assisted in digital video research and on-line game research which was hosted by Professor Yuntsai, Chou, and consigned by CHT; prepared and analyzed data and figures for pages.


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