Could you please correct my following sentence and grammar error?

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Anonymous  #529932  Fri, 20 Jun 08 07:32 AM

please correct my letter..

Most of the advertisement mention about in the requirement

Singaporean/ Singapore PR/ and Malaysian’s welcome.

And then can speak English and Mandarin.

Although you have a good experience, can’t easy to get a job because you can’t speak second language. 

If you can speak English and take a responsibility that will not enough for applying the job.

I think, the entire invoice and some letter wrote both languages. That’s no problem. I can handle it.

 

But some letters mention only mother language so how do I do? Yeah! I’d better go to learn Chinese language or

Shall I go to learn? Or I must learn or??

 


thank you very much. 
salome 

  
Clive  #530143  Fri, 20 Jun 08 02:46 PM
Hi,
It's hard to understand your meanings here, but I''ll try.

Please correct my letter..

Most of the advertisements mention the requirements.

Singaporeans, Singapore PRs and Malaysians are welcome.

You must speak English and Mandarin.

Although you have good experience, it is not easy to get a job because you can’t speak a second language. 

If you can speak English and take responsibility, that will not be enough when applying for the job.

I think the entire invoice and some letters are written in both languages. That’s no problem. I can handle it.

But some letters use only the writer's mother language, so what should I do? Yeah! I’d better go and learn Chinese.

Shall I go to learn it? Or must I learn it?

Clive

  
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Anonymous  #530405  Sat, 21 Jun 08 04:35 AM
Dear Clive

Thank you very much for helping me.

best wishes
salome
  
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