Could you please help to correct my grammar, thanks

Ice2007 wrote:

Cargo inspected yesterday, but the result was is pending due to some  points need to clarify which need clarifying/clarification. We would like to explain these to you, as details as follows: -  1) Your QC Amy found that there have 1000pcs were stocked outside of the factory in another site. It This is because production has led to  excessive stock at the factory, which will affect their production. Therefore, they a nearby warehouse/storage facility was rented a nearest to stock the finished goods. But, these cargoes However, these items were moved back to the factory during Amy's inspection. 2) Those cargoes These items were the outstanding shipment for September, and produced in August. Therefore, the serial number shown on the products were for August. 3) You agreed to accepted this carton mark (P/O number 1234) on last week. Please help to release the above points for us today to arrange shipment closing tomorrow. Please confirm that the above points are acceptable so that we can arrange for shipment tomorrow.