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Pls could you correct my letter -Thanks

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Anonymous  #576934  Thu, 16 Oct 08 11:46 AM

Dear ***

 

 

We paid your expense by mistake twice to your bank account on 19 September 2008

Please see your bank statement and let us knows if any problem is in 14 days

If we haven’t heard from you will be deduct £ 36.00 from your next expense payment.

 

Sorry for the inconvenient we have caused

 

You’re sincerely

  
Fandorin  #577054  Thu, 16 Oct 08 07:54 PM

Anonymous

Dear ***

 

 

We paid your expense twice   to on your bank's account on 19 September 2008 mistakenly.

Please see your bank statement and let us know if there is any problem is, during 14 days.

If we isn't being noticed, you will be deducted £ 36.00 from your next expense's payment.

 

Sorry if we've caused any inconveniences.

 

Sincerely yours, ***
  
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