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Could you help to correct my sentence please

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Anonymous  #536576  Fri, 04 Jul 08 11:05 AM

could you help to correct the following please. tq,

"We also would like to confirm that no exception or deviation taken to this contract as listed in Section F (Attachment 2A Unpriced Exceptions)"

or

We are confirming that there are no exception or deviation taken as listed in Section F (Attachment 2A unpriced exceptions)

  
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Feebs11  #536813  Fri, 04 Jul 08 11:49 PM
 You do not need "taken" in either sentence.

 

#1 is the better sentence. 

  
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