we could hear if anyone came along the trail.

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New2grammar  #537930  Mon, 07 Jul 08 07:50 PM
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Yes — CJ confirmed you, although I still don't quite understand how 'could' works...


Sorry, I got myself confused. I was referring to
we could/would hear anyone come along the trail"

Can I say 'came'?

(EDIT: I don't think "CJ confirmed you " is correct. It shoud be CJ confirmed your 'something' or he agreed with you)
  
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Ant_222  #537933  Mon, 07 Jul 08 07:57 PM
Although you are right about "confirmed", I think it's incorrect to say "We could/would hear anyone came along the track".
  
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New2grammar  #537934  Mon, 07 Jul 08 07:59 PM
Thanks, Ant. I agree that come is commonly used in this construction. But I'm wondering whether 'came' is also correct and if there's any difference. Maybe a native speaker will clarify.
  
Ant_222  #537946  Mon, 07 Jul 08 08:40 PM
This time you may believe me, "I could hear anyone came along the trail" is 100% wrong.
  
New2grammar  #537952  Mon, 07 Jul 08 08:44 PM
Ant, I think you are right. Google supports you. Thank you.
  
CalifJim  #538065  Tue, 08 Jul 08 02:06 AM
Ant_222
"I could hear anyone came along the trail" is 100% wrong.
Yes.  With came, it is wrong.

With come or coming, it is fine, however. 

CJ 

  
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New2grammar  #538066  Tue, 08 Jul 08 02:07 AM
Thanks, CJ.
  
CalifJim  #538067  Tue, 08 Jul 08 02:15 AM
It was so quiet we could hear if anyone came along the trail.
This is understandable as it stands, but I think the intended meaning is better expressed in a different way:

It was so quiet (that) [we would have been able to hear  (=could have heard) / would have heard] anyone [who came / who was coming / coming] along the trail.

Compare this with a commonly made remark:

It was so quiet you could have heard a pin drop.  << This is the more idiomatic one.

(Not  It was so quiet you could hear if a pin dropped.)

CJ 

  
New2grammar  #538068  Tue, 08 Jul 08 02:20 AM
CJ, at that time, I didn't want my reader to know whether anyone else would show up. I'm afraid 'could have heard/would have heard' would give that away. What do you think?
Thanks.
  
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