Hallo
I am for the first time here. I want to apply for a position of German account internship in an chinese company.
I never wrote an application before. Can you please look at this letter and give me some advice what can I do better.
I am also not sure about the grammar. Can you please tell me if something is wrong!
THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR YOUR HELP !!
Dear ***,
I am writing you to express my interest in the German account internship at the company ***.
I am currently studying a B.A. in Computer Science with an e-Business focus at the *** graduating in 2010.
My aim is to work in an international field of work related to marketing and consulting. Subjects which I am studying that are relevant to the post of German account internship include Project Management, R&D, Finance and Controlling, Developing Database, Marketing and Strategic Management.
At the work as a student employee in a small team I have collected experiences with Photoshop and Dreamweaver. The work has referred to the updating and developing of the WNB homepage.
With pleasure I would offer to you my cooperation and I am very interested in gaining an opportunity with your company to use the skills I developed, in a 6 months-practical internship, starting in September 2008.
I have excellent teamwork and leadership skills as evidenced by numerous university projects involving teams. I have a good command of written and spoken German. I also have a good command of written and spoken English and Russian.
I have strong evidence to show that my communication and organisational skills are also well developed.
An opportunity to apply my skills with an international perspective at your company would be an excellent opportunity for both of us.
I enclose my CV outlining my experience to date and key skill areas which I believe are relevant to this post. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss my application with you and I look forward to hear from you.
Thank you very much for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely
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