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changeling  #538689  Wed, 09 Jul 08 12:21 PM
Hi everybody!

I’m writing my part of the marketing report for our foreign colleagues. Could you, please, check my grammar and vocabulary in the following sentences? I appreciate your help

Macroeconomic environment of the project

Inflation and currency corrections

According to the monetary policy priorities for 2006-2008, approved by the resolution no 20 dated November 11, 2006 of the Board of the National Bank of Republic of Kazakhstan, two inflation scenarios for tenge have been developed subject to global oil prices that significantly influence the inflation tendencies in Kazakhstan.
In 2006, the scenario on high oil prices was unfolding. The Brent crude oil prices averaged $65.4 a barrel in 2006 and they continue to rule high in 2007, rising up to $75 a barrel. With all the measures taken to maintain price stability, the average inflation rate was 8.6% in 2006, which was slightly higher than expected rate of inflation under the scenario on high oil prices (6.9-8.5%). According to official data of the Kazakhstan Statistics Agency, annualized inflation rate as of June, 2007 was at 8.1%.


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Mr Wordy  #539438  Thu, 10 Jul 08 06:44 PM

Some suggestions:

According to As part of the monetary policy priorities for 2006-2008, approved by the Resolution no 20 dated November 11, 2006 of the Board of the National Bank of the Republic of Kazakhstan, two inflation scenarios for the tenge have been developed were projected, subject to depending on the level of global oil prices that (which significantly influences the inflation tendencies in Kazakhstan). One projection assumed lower oil prices and the other higher oil prices. [I assume]

In 2006, the scenario on high oil price scenario was already unfolding. The Brent crude oil prices averaged $65.4 a barrel in 2006 and they continued to rule run high in 2007, rising up to $75 a barrel. With all the measures taken to maintain price stability, the average inflation rate was 8.6% in 2006, which was slightly higher than that expected rate of inflation under the scenario on high oil price scenario (6.9-8.5%). According to official data of the Kazakhstan Statistics Agency, the annualized inflation rate as of June, 2007 was at 8.1%.

  
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