Click here to play!

Could you please review my movitation letter?

Click here to play
   Share on Facebook  
TactileHeartache  #326262  Thu, 08 Feb 07 02:52 PM

(Name)

(Address)

Tel

Mobile

Email:

 

(Company Name)

Human Resource Department

(Company Address)

 

Dear Ms. (***):

 

I would like to express my interest in Fund Accountants position with (Company Name). Throughout my job search, I have come to respect the professionalism that characterizes your firm and employees. In addition, I have had the pleasure to visit your website, and am very enthusiastic about the position advertised. I feel confident that my combination of education and business sensibilities would serve (Company Name) well in this position. On the other hand, I am sure that values and objectives of the (Company Name) team would highly complement my own strengths and enthusiasm.

 

I have been awarded the degree of (BBB) from (University's Name). My major is International Financial Management. My educational background in Accounting, combined with my internship experience, has been excellent preparation for the position at (Company Name).

 

You specify in your advertisement that you are looking for someone who is a team player with highly accurate and excellent communication skills in English and has affinity with investments and figures. I might be the right person you are looking for. During my placement in (Company Name 2) in Amsterdam, I had the opportunity to work closely with colleagues communicating with different travel agencies in Germany, France, Italy and China about the tour groups’ hotels, meals and buses organizations in the Netherlands. As a result, I played an active role in the team and the management was very satisfied by the outcomes. In addition, as the manager assistant, I enjoyed taking the responsibility initiatively for the balance sheet; net income and cash flows at every ends of the month. Furthermore, I am confident with my verbal and written English. On (Date), I scored (Number) for the IELTS exam (acdemic) in Amsterdam which proves me a good English user.

 

(Company Name)'s Fund Accountants is very exciting. I believe my personality and ability will be qualified for the job position I am applying for in company. Attached please find my CV. Please do let me know if you need any further information. I greatly appreciate you taking the time to review my credentials and experience. I will keep contact with you if you agree that my qualifications seem to be a match for the position. If so, I hope to schedule an interview at a mutually convenient time. Thank you for you consideration, and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

 

Sincerely,

 

(Name)
  
Not Ranked
Joined on Fri, Jan 26 2007
New Member (02)
TactileHeartache  #326264  Thu, 08 Feb 07 02:54 PM
Above is my motivation letter for a position in a fund company in amsterdam. I wonder if someone could please check for me whether there are something improper. Thank you very much in advance.
  
AddThis Feed Button RSS Feed: ESL, Formal, General & Business Letter Writing (English language)
© 2008 MediaCET Ltd.
Terms and Conditions