Assman  +  691027 Thu, 26 Mar 09 02:28 AM Hi all, I would be grateful if someone correct my mistakes. Q: You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you get home you find that you have left a bag at the hotel. -- A: Dear Sir, I stayed at your hotel to spend my weekend holiday last week. The wonderful accommodating environment and nice services were also memorable. That should be a wonderful trip to me, however, I found that my bag has been left in hotel room after I return home yesterday. I remember that my room number should be RM110 in phase II. My bag was made my leather and the colour was black, the size of it was just a little smaller that a notebook computer. I can be reach via my cell phone number 977. Please let me know if you find it. Regards John Assman Joined on Wed, Feb 4 2009 New Member 35 Writing, Mistakes, Countries, France, Australia, Colours

	the desert  +  691740 Fri, 27 Mar 09 10:57 PM iam not so professional but i hope this can help u Dear Sir,       I stayed at your hotel to spend my weekend holiday last week. The wonderful accommodating environment and nice services were also memorable.  It was a wonderful trip for me, however, I found that I forgot my bag my returning to home yesterday.         I can remeber that my room was NO 110 in Phase II. My bag was made of leather and its colour is black.  Its size is just a little smaller than a notebook computer.        I can be reached via  my cell phone number 977. Please let me know if you find it.   Regards John the desert Joined on Thu, Mar 12 2009 Egypt New Member 01 Writing, Countries, France, Colours

	Grammar Geek  +  691767 Sat, 28 Mar 09 02:01 AM Hi, Letters like this need to be short and to the point. The fact that you enjoyed good service there is not important. If you mention is, it should be after you say what you need. I have just returned from a weekend stay at your hotel and realized that I left my bag behind. I stayed in room RM110 in Phase II (I have no idea what that means. Here, we just say "Room 1305.") It is a small black leather bag, just a bit smaller than a notebook computer. Please let me know if you find it, and how I can arrange to have it sent to me. I would appreciate it if you would contact me at [provide telephone number] either way. I had a wonderful expererience at your hotel and I hope that my bag is found, so that I can remember the trip as being a complete pleasure and not marred by my forgetfulness. *** The  manager doesn't care that it was a holiday. He doesn't care that it's your cell phone or your landline. Just provide the basic facts.     Grammar Geek Joined on Tue, Jan 10 2006 Veteran Member 19,671 Barbara, who answers in American English. My housekeeping skills attest to the truth of the second law of thermodynamics: Left to themselves, things get more and more random! Writing, Colours