could you check this letter..

I  want to send a letter to a university asking for information. I thought to write this:

<<Dear sir or madam ,

I am writing as I would like some information about the master programme .................

I am international student ( I have a degree in psychology ,University of Crete-Greece) and  I am really interested in this field of psychology.

Therefore ,I would be really grateful if you could provide me futher information  not only about  the learning outcomes but also about the entry requirements  in order to organise my papers and my engish exams (IELTS) as soon as possible.

I look forward to receiving your reply .

Yours faithfully ,

......................>>

please check it and point possible mistakes ...

thank you in advance!!!!!!!!

Iam an International student who have graduated in Psychology from University of Crete-Greece. Iam very keen to continue to study in the subject Psychology.

Can you breife me the eligibilty critria to study Masters in Psychology in your university. It will help me to speed up  my preparations.

Thanking you & awaiting your response.