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Latest post Wed, Sep 10 2008 6:37 PM by ntfreelancer. 2 replies.
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changeling  +  563691 Mon, 08 Sep 08 10:41 AM
Hi everybody!
Could you, please, proofread the following paragraph?

Today, all kinds of goodies come in small packages. Supposedly, it should help sweet teeth cut back on their portion sizes. However, a study published in Journal of Consumer Research shows that the reality of small packages is different.


Thanks in advance

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Mister Micawber  +  563696 Mon, 08 Sep 08 10:49 AM
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Today, all kinds of goodies come in small packages. Supposedly, they should help the sweet-toothed cut back on their portion sizes. However, a study published in the Journal of Consumer Research shows that the reality of small packaging is different.
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ntfreelancer  +  564584 Wed, 10 Sep 08 06:37 PM




Wonderful attempt of proofreading on behalf of Mister Micawber. I appreciate it greSmileatly!
Mister Micawber
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Today, all kinds of goodies come in small packages. Supposedly, they should help the sweet-toothed cut back on their portion sizes. However, a study published in the Journal of Consumer Research shows that the reality of small packaging is different.


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