Hi again,
I've suggested quite few edits, so please read carefully.
You seem to be an extremely strong candidate for the job.
Clive
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to your recent website advertisement for an Associate Legal Officer. I confidently believe that I match the profile you are looking for.
I have worked as a lawyer, as a teacher of criminal law at university, and as a judicial secretary. Currently, I am an appellate judge in the Court of Appeal of Castilla y León.
I don't know, but to me the post of 'judicial secretary' sounds less impressive, so should not be mentioned.
The Associate Legal Officer should be a specialist in criminal law and be able to prepare legal opinions for internal discussion. During the last nine years, I have worked mainly in the fields of Criminal Law and Comparative Law. I wrote my PhD dissertation on these subjects. I have strong experience in legal research methods, analysis and writing. I am also familiar with different legal systems. I have won five research awards, which demonstrates my excellence in these fields. I can communicate and work comfortably in Spanish, English, French and German. I am familiar with applications such as Microsoft Word, Excel, PowerPoint and Internet research, as well as with HTML and electronic document management.
As well as having relevant knowledge and experience, I believe I possess the personal qualities you ask for in your advertisement. I am thorough, results-oriented and able to work under pressure. Therefore, I consider myself to be a person who is well suited for this position.
I would like to obtain this position, and I am confident of my ability to make a long-term contribution. I look forward to the opportunity to discuss my application further in an interview, at your convenience.
Sincerely,