Please help to modify this cover letter of mine..it sounds not good. i know theres a lot i need to correct. thanks

Dear Sir:

Please accept the attached resume for the position of Architect as recently advertised in your website. I had the pleasure to review the company’s profile and I’m very enthusiastic about the position advertised. I believe that my technical experience would serve the company name well in this position.

To the extend that the company requires, I have two specific experience in two areas that are closely related. As a designing Architect, I normally do the conceptual design up to the final design development, coordination of work to other discipline. I handled construction supervision and monitoring the progress of works. Evaluate and review the submitted drawing of the sub-contractor and accomplishment report.

I greatly appreciate you taking time to review my credentials and experience. I hope that you’ll find my experience, interest, and character intriguing enough to call for an interview, as I am confident that I could provide value to your company as member of your team.

Sincerely,

jan