Hello all,
First of all, i would like to thank everyone who have good posts on this forum. It helps me a lot when I learn English.
I am now writting a PhD. Cover Letter. I would highly appreciate any help to improve it.
Please help! I am not good at writting .
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Dear
Sir or Madam,
On
recommendation of Prof. Dr. ***, University of ***, I am writing to you in order to apply for the PhDtthe PhD-program you are offering. Student position at ***. I have enclosed a
completed resume for your review.
My
name is Quan Nguyen, a fresh graduate from University of *** [Please don't introduce yourselve in a formal letter, it is very unprofessional. Besides, your resume is enclosed.] In March 2007, I hold got the Master degree in
Communication and Media Engineering. During my last academic year, I
had a chance to do an my internship and master thesis in the *** company. There I gained profound developed not only my knowledges in web
development but also real as well as working experiences in an international
environment. My thesis is related to the issues in Business
Intelligent and Web 2.0. I obtained skills in J2EE programming and
advanced web technologies for Enterprise Applications including
Jboss, Portal/Portlet, Ajax, Web services,etc.. It was a great
experience for me, which has
focused my interests on the topic of Web
2.0 technologies.
After
my graduation, I worked as a PHP developer for ***, an IT and
business consulting company. I gained further experiences in web
programming, project management and team-working.
As
well as my good understanding of academic principles, I am a very
motivated, hardworking and effective individual. Throughout my
career, I obtained a good communication and organizational skills. It
makes me confident that I will be suitable for your research team.
For
my future career, I see this PhD program as the way to broaden my
knowledges in designing and implementing Enterprise Distributed
Applications, as well as how to apply these applications use them in business,
which in the case that SAP is now the best solution. This Your program proposes covers areas of
research that match my interests, such as Business Process Management
and Semantic Web Technologies. I have no doubt in mind that I have
enough knowledges, skills and competence to pursue the PhD program in
your research center.
I
would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss how I
may be suitable for this position. I
am now on vacation in Vietnam, but can be reached at any time via
email or telephone at number +***.[Your contact data should be in the resume and every person in the business wourld know how to reach an other person. If your contact data are not on the resume, you should put it there and don't write about it. Again, it looks very unprofessional, sorry, if I am too hard by trying to help]
Thank
you very much for your time an your consideration. My resume is enclosed. I look forward to hearing from
you.
Yours
faithfully,
Quan Nguyen