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Guest  +  78119 Thu, 03 Mar 05 03:10 PM
hello,

can someone please help me with my cover letter ? it is for an abroad internship on a renowned automobile manufacture. it would be great, if you could corret this letter. Thanx a lot !!

Dear Sir or Madam,

my name is... and I would like to apply for an internship on the .... [ is it an internship on or with ?] .
Since October 2001 I am studying Business Administration at the University of Passau
with emphasis on Organisation & Human Resources, Production & Logistics and Marketing.

I recently finished a five-month internship on ..... at the department ‘Warehouse Inbound / Outbound Control’. Since I really enjoyed my work and made a good performance in the assistance of several projects for the new Central Distribution Center, I would like to gain further work experience at ....

Therefore I apply for an internship on your ... Plant for the period of mid August until mid December.

The abroad internship program of .... provides the ideal opportunity to learn more about foreign cultures and enables me to prove my language skills in daily life. In addition, working abroad is a great chance to widen my horizon and to get a more detailed insight into how life – especially working life in your country looks like.

As an open-minded and friendly person, I have no problem to integrate in new teams. So I am convinced that my communicative and conceptual skills will make me an asset to your department.

Thank you for considering my application. Enclosed you will find a resume, which will give you additional information on my background and qualifications. I am available for an interview at your convenience. Feel free to call me at ...

Yours sincerely,




Mister Micawber  +  78211 Fri, 04 Mar 05 12:04 AM

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is... and I would like to apply for an internship with the ... Plant for the period from mid-August until mid-December 2005.

Since October 2001, I have been studying Business Administration at the University of Passau
with emphases on Organisation & Human Resources, Production & Logistics, and Marketing.

I recently finished a five-month internship with ..... in their Warehouse Inbound/Outbound Control Department. I enjoyed my work and performed it well, in assisting several projects for the new Central Distribution Center, I would like to gain further work experience at ....

The Internship Abroad program of .... provides an ideal opportunity for me to learn more about foreign cultures, and will enable me to improve my language skills. In addition, working abroad is a great chance to widen my horizon and to get a more detailed insight into life-- especially working life-- in your country.

As an open-minded and friendly person, I easily integrate into new teams. I am convinced that my communicative and conceptual skills will make me an asset to your department.

Thank you for considering my application. Enclosed you will find my resume, which will give you additional information on my background and qualifications. I am available for an interview at your convenience. Feel free to call me at ...

Sincerely yours,
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