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Motivation Letter:
The
Graduate programme in Finance at Hampton
College is according my
target to develop my skills on the financial field for a knowledge improvement
and a career progression on the financial industry. Regarding the excellent
reputation of Hampton College in specific, the Department of Economics, and
its international recognized researches, I have chosen Hampton to study. Furthermore, I also plan to
do the Master in Finance at Hampton,
after finishing the graduate finance program.
I have a
work experience in La Caja, one of the biggest spanishes bank in assets,
working in an external commission auditing loans contracts and reporting
directly for the Spanish Central Bank and the National Treasury. After that, I
have finished my degree and I came to London
to improve my English skills when I have started to work in a International
Company of Funds’ Transfers, liasing with more than 240 banks around the world,
processing and confirming multi FX settlements, treasury, daily reconcialitions
and cheque risk administrations. Starting as sales executive and finishing as a
manager in the central branch of the company.
Aside my
working experience, I also have knowledge in stock market, being a keen awareness of world events, current affair and
financial markets. My interest in those subjects have started after I made a
course, during my degree, in financial markets and technical chart analysis, and
I have started to invest on the Madrid Stock Exchange using an online
stockbroker platform.
I have studied the elementary and
high school in a top school in Madrid, Montfort School,
which allowed me to enter in a top 5 university in Madrid, Universidad Complutense de Madrid.
Where I have studied Business Administration, what the equivalent in UK would be a Bachelor
Hons Degree in Science in Business Administration. Which includes, statistics,
finance, accounting, marketing, economics, administration, human resource and
strategy planning.
Thus, I am very motivated in
improve my mathematical skills and my technical knowledge in finance with Hampton College.
Your sincerely,
Anderson.