cover letter please help

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Anonymous  #500582  Mon, 14 Apr 08 03:32 PM

I need someone to proofread this sentence for me please. Am I missing a comma somewhere?

"I would love the opportunity to work for your company as this would allow me to use my writing abilities and my education in International Relations."
  
Clive  #500734  Mon, 14 Apr 08 09:20 PM

Hi,

It's fine.

Clive

  
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