Can someone please correct my covvering letter? It will be kind of you.

Dear ***,

I am writing to indicate my interest in the position of Order Management Coordinator. I would like to bring to your company my school and professional background.

I am 27 years old, native French speaker and graduated with a Master Business and Finance.

I have been working for almost 2 years within the Fortis Investments Management Reconciliation sector. I was in charge of internal audit of fund investments. I used to find out and solve out accountancy discrepencies. Therefore I dealt everyday with counterparties. Afterwards, I was employed in a stock exchange company in order to ensure the set up and the following up of fund transfers between B2B clients.

The experience allowed me to learn important financial skills and to develop my ability to adapt myself quickly in a competitive work environement. I would mean; the stress management, financial data's processing and communication skills. In addition I am familiar with Excel wich was my main work tool, Word, Acces and Powerpoint. I am currently training in SAP for 1 month.

It would be a great opportunty if I can gain experience abroad especially in a business English speaking environement. That is why I am applying for this job.

I have enclosed my resume for your review. Thank you for your time and consideration.

It would be a pleasure to interview with you and I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,