covering letter correction

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Anonymous  #532829  Thu, 26 Jun 08 12:38 PM

Hi, could you please help me and correct my covering letter? I would apprieciate any suggestions:) thank you:)


Dear Sir or Madam,

 

I am writing to apply for the position of Office Clerk.

I have a wide range of office experience gained working as administrator for many companies.  I have mature, responsible attitude, high level of numeracy and a good attention to detail. I am a very well organised individual who is self reliant, efficient and capable of working under pressure within a strict time frame.

 

I have enclosed my CV for your review. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you soon, and am available for an interview at whatever time is suitable for

 

Yours faithfully,

 
XYZ

  
Abil  #533617  Sat, 28 Jun 08 05:32 AM
Well written, but have not you left out "you" after "suitable for"

I wish you all the success.
  
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