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Shakespear_is_love  +  213015 Thu, 06 Apr 06 08:51 PM

Our English teacher asked us to create a metaphor and similie  for few sentences. i came up with few..

couldnt do anymore..so id appreciate it if someone can help me out..

1)      A green Volkswagen with pink and yellow daisies pasted on it.

 

2)      A skyscraper the top of which is lost in fog.

 

3)      A thin old woman in a ragged dressed

 

thank you in advance  :-)

 

Amy.

 

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Anonymous, 3 yr 216 days ago

Amy,

A simile uses the terms 'like' or 'as',

 so your first sentence could be 'A VW like a field of flowers - green and painted with pink and yellow daises.

A metaphor uses a descriptive term, for example,

'English was a dark forest to me, but after my classes it has become a sunny field.'

Hope this helps!

Susan Stewart, M.S., M.B.A., TEFL

MrPedantic  +  213041 Thu, 06 Apr 06 10:56 PM

Hello Amy, welcome to English Forums!

I'm not quite sure what the question is – are your sentences your examples of similes and metaphors? Or did you want someone to suggest similes that would suit your sentences?

See you,

MrP

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Shakespear_is_love  +  213157 Fri, 07 Apr 06 08:57 AM

Hey there Ms Susan Stewart

Thank you  so much Smile [:)] I know what a smilie, and a metaphor are. I'm just not good at creating them esp metaphors Sad [:(]

Yes it really helped, thank you.

Amy.

Shakespear_is_love  +  213160 Fri, 07 Apr 06 09:03 AM

Hello there Mr P.

Thank you for the warm welcome.

Oh yes, sorry I wasnt clear at all.

Well the sentences above are not examples of similes and/or metaphors. Our english teacher asked us to create a metaphor and/or a simile for each of the following descriptions:

1. Umbrellas popping out during a sudden downpour.

2. A friend who bursts angrily into your room.

3. A green Volkswagen with pink and yellow daisies pasted on it.

4. An ambulance speeding through traffic with its siren wailing.

5. A skyscraper the top of which is lost in fog.

6. A thin old woman in a ragged dressed.

I came up with a metaphor for the first one, and another metaphor for the 4th one, I'm working on the 2nd one. I would appreciate it if someone suggest some metaphors and/or similies for me.

Thanks Mr P for your time Smile [:)]

Anonymous, 1 yr 315 days ago
give me a metaphor for liking pink
Anonymous, 1 yr 6 days ago
as hard as iron

as cold as ice

as strong as an ox

as ugly as --

as weak as--

as new as --

can you supply the answers?   
Anonymous, 325 days ago
pink is an exotic flower
Anonymous, 325 days ago
as ugly as dirt

as weak as wind
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