creating suspense....Is this correct?

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	Creativeguru  #538660  Wed, 09 Jul 08 10:40 AM Interested in new line of jewellery : For Fashion Women Very unique Instant visual identification Are you?      Creativeguru Joined on Fri, Feb 8 2008 India Regular Member (729)

	Mister Micawber  #538665  Wed, 09 Jul 08 11:04 AM . Sorry, CG, but to me it just seems to be unrelated phrases.    Mister Micawber Joined on Wed, Aug 4 2004 Yokohama Veteran Member (20,418) 'The question is,' said Humpty Dumpty, 'which is to be master-- that's all.'

	Neeraj Jain  #538672  Wed, 09 Jul 08 11:15 AM I don't think that this is creating any suspense.    Neeraj Jain Joined on Fri, Sep 7 2007 Regular Member (582) Smile allows you to win.

	Creativeguru  #538679  Wed, 09 Jul 08 11:44 AM How about the following...............  Build the strong international business network… A new line of jewellery: For Fashion Women Very unique Instant visual identification   Are you interested?      Creativeguru

	Mister Micawber  #538681  Wed, 09 Jul 08 11:54 AM . OK, with a few adjustments: Build a strong international business network… A new line of jewellery... For fashionable women Unique Instant visual identification Are you interested? Things are either unique or not unique; the word is not gradable.    Mister Micawber

	Creativeguru  #538688  Wed, 09 Jul 08 12:16 PM Thanks a lot    Creativeguru