A bit too verbose. It needs some paring. Try this:LETTER OF RECOMMENDATION
I am pleased to write this letter of recommendation for my student,
Mr XYZ who
wishes to
pursue graduate studies
at your
institution. I have known him for more than three years as a student of
the Department of Electronics and Instrumentation Engineering and have
been
impressed by his zest for knowledge.
I taught him
in the courses “Computer Control of Processes” and
“Digital Signal Processing” and found him to be a gifted
student. He had
a quick grasp of the material and took part actively
in classroom discussions.
He went beyond the required
coursework to enrich
himself. I have seen him
improve steadily over the years as a student
, always striving to excel. He is
always eager to learn
and correct himself
; he accepts authority and is, above all, humble.
He is a very responsible and diligent student
, with sufficient
motivation to excel in his chosen
field. He has a keen urge to understand
practical engineering concepts beyond the
theoretical, reflecting his potential for research. Besides academics, he
has an avid interest in computers and
environmental concerns. His good
general knowledge and analytical skills are noteworthy. He can express
himself fluently in English and communicates very well
with people.
I strongly believe that he will make a name for himself in
your
institution, and
I strongly recommend him for the graduate
program with full financial assistance and wish him all the best
in
his future endeavors.
2.
I am glad to write this letter of recommendation
for XYZ, a graduate
student in the Department of Electronics & Instrumentation
Engineering. I
lectured in his course on
Basic Civil Engineering, so I have had ample
opportunity to assess
his abilities.
XYZ has had a good academic record throughout the
course and is an
excellent student
, showing good analytical
skills. Whilst
assessing his c
lass submissions on Environmental Studies,
I observed that he had a propensity for
in-depth analysis,
a good understanding of the subject, and a
full engagement of his intellectual faculties.
He is systematic and organized at
work and has shown
a predilection for research.
In my considered opinion, XYZ is a well
-qualified and deserving
candidate for
advanced study. Accordingly, I strongly recommend him for
graduate studies at
the university of his choice with full financial
assistance.