Hi,

I am working in software company. i have to joini in other company on October5th, but there is a client issue in current comany there is a delay in joining to new company. so i need to write a decent mail to inform this message. my new joining date is november2nd. so please help me to write a decent mail.
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Hi Friend,

Here is my letter

Its Been a work pressure due to resigning two persons in a team at a time, i am forced to stay back till october 30th.So my date of relieving confirmed on 30th of October. I have tried as much as possible to relieve on or before 30th of september in order to join on 5th of October.But the managers didn't accepted. Even i have tried to pay the notice amount to be relieved on 5th september, i failed to get approvel. So I am requesting you to accept my date of joining will be on 2nd november instead of October 5th. I promise that there wont be any delay on joining 2nd november.

Please let me know in case you need to discuss with me further on this.

please correct my sentence and gramatic mistakes. please help me in this
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Its Been a work pressure due to resigning two persons in a team at a time, i am forced to stay back till october 30th.So my date of relieving confirmed on 30th of October. I have tried as much as possible to relieve on or before 30th of september in order to join on 5th of October.But the managers didn't accepted. Even i have tried to pay the notice amount to be relieved on 5th september, i failed to get approvel. So I am requesting you to accept my date of joining will be on 2nd november instead of October 5th. I promise that there wont be any delay on joining 2nd november.

Please let me know in case you need to discuss with me further on this.


Okay, I'll give it a try. In some places I'm not exactly sure what you mean.

Due to the pressure of two members of my work team resigning at the same time, I am forced to stay in my present job until October 30. I have tried as much as possible to be relieved on or before September 30 in order to start work with your company on October 5, but this was not possible. I even offered to pay the penalty for short notice in order to be relieved on September 5, but this was refused. (Did you really mean September 5 here? Or September 30?) So I am requesting that you accept my start date with your company to be November 2 instead of October 5. I promise there will be no further delay.

Please contact me if you want to discuss this further.
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Hi Koff,

you hav given excellent correction exactly what i expected. Thanks a lot friend.
Anonymous:
Due to the shortage in manpower at my present organization, I am forced to stay in my present job until July 14. I have tried as much as possible to be relieved on or before June 30 in order to start work with your company on July 1, but this was not possible. I even offered to pay the penalty for short notice in order to be relieved on June 30, but this was refused. So I am requesting that you accept my start date with your company to be July 15 instead of July 1. I promise there will be no further delay.

Please contact me if you want to discuss this further.
Anonymous:
Hi khoff Really thank you for post this late of joining and correction has been made on this sentence. It helps to improve my communication and gives some idea and examples how to draft a mail for my late of joining in new organization.

Thanks due have a wonderful day.
Anonymous:
Greetings,

Thanks for the opportunity provided to me in your organization.

As per the offer letter i am supposed to join on 1st November. Unfortunately i met an accident recently broken my elbow. I got the plaster on same. The doctor has advised me to take complete rest for 4-5 weeks.

I request you to delay by joining by 1 month.
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