When he is in the deep thinking of this question

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Angliholic  #545226  Wed, 23 Jul 08 02:37 AM
Tom was uncertain whether he should donate his money or save it to buy a Gameboy. When he was in the deep thinking of this question, he saw a little girl putting some money into the donation box.


Hi,
Is it better to rewrite the bolded part as "When he was wrapped/absorbed in this problem?" Thanks.
  
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Marius Hancu  #545227  Wed, 23 Jul 08 02:38 AM
 Yes, better
  
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