"demonstrating high communication ability" or "demonstrating a high com..."

Hello,

I'm still double-triple checking my CV... OMg, I have to stop one day

Anyway, which one of the following sentences is the correct one?

1- using professional, polite and clear telephone manner and letter writing skills demonstrating high communication ability.

2- using professional, polite and clear telephone manner and letter writing skills demonstrating a high communication ability.

Thanks in advance
Ludo

Hi,

1- using professional, polite and clear telephone manner and letter writing skills demonstrating high communication ability.

Such point form use of incomplete sentences is OK, in fact recommended, in a resume or CV. However, I'd reword it to put what I consider the most important part first, followed by the supporting details. eg

strong communication ability, demonstrated by professional, polite and clear telephone manner and letter writing skills.

Best wishes, Clive

Hi Ludo,

Myself, I like the second version better. But resumes are subjective, think about it and see what appeals to you more.

Good luck with it,

Clive