hi forums i need grammar correction about description a fish. thanks for your attention.

The shape of body is oval like other cichlids. The fish length maximum is 15 cm so firemouth cichlid is small cichlids. Same like most cichlids, firemouth has larger head. They have long mouth. I thought that is why people called it the fire mouth. The color of body is blue-gray with wonderful pearl spot. There are some black spot at the middle of body. The fin color is transparent with pearl spot. Below mouth and abdomen, we can see reddish color. The black iris eye is proportional with his body.
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forlanThe shape of its / the body is oval like other cichlids. (It grows to a )The fish length maximum length of is 15 cm so the firemouth cichlid is a small cichlids.
Same as like most cichlids, (better: As most cichlids,) the firemouth has a larger head. They have long mouth. I thought that is why people called it the firemouth.
The color of its / the body is blue-gray with wonderful pearl spots. There are some black spots on at the middle of the body. The fin color is transparent with pearl spots.
Below the mouth and abdomen, we can see a reddish color. The black iris eye is proportional with his (better: "its", unless you are describing the male fish) body.
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