'I didn't know if my eyes (will) ever heal'

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WesternAmerican  #396155  Tue, 24 Jul 07 05:47 PM

Hello everybody,

Is it correct to say/write:
I didn't know if my eyes ever heal?


P.S
I'm in a conflict --->  Does it sound natural?

  
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Clive  #396165  Tue, 24 Jul 07 06:17 PM

Hi,

Is it correct to say/write:
I didn't know if my eyes ever heal?

P.S
I'm in a conflict --->  Does it sound natural?

Your tenses seem wrong. Please provide a context or scenario in which you would say this. That way, we can see what you mean by this.

Best wishes, Clive

  
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WesternAmerican  #396171  Tue, 24 Jul 07 06:27 PM

My doctor gave me unclear answers about my eyes condition.
I was clueless; I didn't know if my eyes (would) ever heal.
Perhaps 'could'  could follow 'eyes'?
eg I was clueless; I didn't know if my eyes could ever heal.

  
Clive  #396178  Tue, 24 Jul 07 06:38 PM

Hi,

Yes, could or would. Probably would.

Clive

  
WesternAmerican  #396182  Tue, 24 Jul 07 06:43 PM

Clive, I thought that will and would(future) mustn't follow the word if.
Have I been wrong all this time?

  
Clive  #396187  Tue, 24 Jul 07 07:03 PM

Hi,

It appears so.

I don't know if it will rain.

I'm afraid to propose to Mary because I don't know if she would marry me.

Is there some special type of sentence that you are thinking of?

Clive

  
WesternAmerican  #396189  Tue, 24 Jul 07 07:07 PM

Argh, thank you.
Yes, it sounds a little peculiar, but I'm comvinced that I read it somewhere.
eg I'm afraid that if I propose to Mary, she'll say no.

  
Clive  #396194  Tue, 24 Jul 07 07:47 PM

Hi,

I thought that will and would(future) mustn't follow the word if.

eg I'm afraid that if I propose to Mary, she'll say no.

Yes, don't use 'will' to refer to the future with 'if', as your example shows. And don't say things like 'If I would become King, I would do this ....'

 

However, here are some places where you can use will/would, so don't say 'mustn't.

If you will wait for a moment, Mr. Smith will soon be able to talk to you. (politeness/willingness/request)

I want to know if you will call me tonight. (indirect speech, where 'if' is like 'whether'.)

Tell me if it would be quicker to go by plane. (indirect speech, where 'if' is like 'whether'.)

If you will make you happy, I'll stop smoking. (the 'if ' clause is seen as the 'result' of the main action.)

For a fuller discussion of these aspects, have a look at Michael Swan's 'Practical English Usage'.

Best wishes, Clive


 

  
CalifJim  #396242  Tue, 24 Jul 07 10:32 PM
I thought that will and would(future) mustn't follow the word if.
Have I been wrong all this time?
That 'rule' does not apply to indirect questions.  Smile [:)]

I don't know if/whether ... will ...
I didn't know if/whether ... would ...
I'm not sure if/whether ... will ...
I wasn't sure if/whether ... would ...
I wonder if/whether ... will ...
I wondered if/whether ... would ...


The 'rule' applies mostly to conditionals.

If I wash the dishes, will you dry them?   (not will wash)
If I washed the dishes, would you dry them?  (not would wash)
If I arrive early, I'll read another chapter of my book.  (not will arrive)
If I arrived early, I'd read another chapter.  (not would arrive)
If they hurry, they won't be late.  (not will hurry)
If they hurried, they wouldn't be late.  (not would hurry)

CJ

  
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